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== Formatting Comments for "10 Reasons I'm Thankful for the God Breathed Bible" article - Spanish Translation<br> ==
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I truly enjoyed proof-reading the above mentioned article.&nbsp; I could not have performed the translation any better, myself.
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In my opinion, Leticia Buffa did an excellent job in capturing the essence of this article.
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As suggested by Charissa, I used "La Biblia de Las Americas (LBLA), as my reference to proof read.
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The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but nevertheless I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.
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I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per item number as listed in the article.
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1. "La Biblia '''aviva''' la fe, fuente de toda obediencia."
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Instead of "aviva" I believe that "'''despierta'''" reflects the term "awakens" in a truer manner.
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Aviva is more in toon with "stimulates".
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3.&nbsp; La Biblia libera de Satanas.
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At the end of the first sentence, I would add the following:
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"'''al ser insultado'''".
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6.&nbsp; La Biblia brinda amor.
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After reviewing 1 Timothy 1:5 in the LBLA, perhaps the following will be closer to the LBLA translation:
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"Pero el propo'sito de nuestra instruccio'n es el amor nacido de un corazo'n puro, de una buena conciencia y de una fe sincera. (1 Timoteo 1:5)"
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'''Please note''' that the accent needs to go directly over the vowel "o" in all cases above.&nbsp; I am not sure of how to set my keyboard to Spanish.&nbsp;
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Would appreciate help in this department.&nbsp;:-)
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7. La Biblia salva.
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Once again, after reviewing the passage in the LBLA, I believe that the following would be a closer translation to the LBLA:
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"Ten cuidado de ti mismo y de la ensen~anza; persevera a todo ello, porque asi' asegurara's tu savacio'n y la salvacio'n de los que te escuchen. (1 Timoteo 4:16)"
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"Con toda perversidad engan~ara' y hara fallecer a los que se pierden por haberse negado a amar la verdad y asi' ser salvos. (2 Tesalonicenses 2:10)"
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9. La Biblia revela as Sen~or.
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I believe that the LBLA translation can be used as is, in this instance:
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"Y el SEN~OR se volvio' a aparecer en Silo; porque el SEN~OR se revelaba a Samuel en Silo por la palabra del SEN~OR. (1 Samuel 3:21)"
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Please advise me on my approach to proof reading this article.&nbsp; I welcome all suggestions for improvement.&nbsp;
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I aplogize for not having started sooner.&nbsp; At present I am planning to dedicate a couple of hours every Sunday to continue the proof reading effort, if this is acceptable.
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In Christ's Love,
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Marina

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Formatting Comments for "10 Reasons I'm Thankful for the God Breathed Bible" article - Spanish Translation

I truly enjoyed proof-reading the above mentioned article.  I could not have performed the translation any better, myself.

In my opinion, Leticia Buffa did an excellent job in capturing the essence of this article.

As suggested by Charissa, I used "La Biblia de Las Americas (LBLA), as my reference to proof read.

The following are some modifications I thought would enhance the translation, but nevertheless I would appreciate a third party's opinion on such.

I will proceed by identifying the modification(s) per item number as listed in the article.


1. "La Biblia aviva la fe, fuente de toda obediencia."

Instead of "aviva" I believe that "despierta" reflects the term "awakens" in a truer manner.

Aviva is more in toon with "stimulates".


3.  La Biblia libera de Satanas.

At the end of the first sentence, I would add the following:

"al ser insultado".


6.  La Biblia brinda amor.

After reviewing 1 Timothy 1:5 in the LBLA, perhaps the following will be closer to the LBLA translation:

"Pero el propo'sito de nuestra instruccio'n es el amor nacido de un corazo'n puro, de una buena conciencia y de una fe sincera. (1 Timoteo 1:5)"

Please note that the accent needs to go directly over the vowel "o" in all cases above.  I am not sure of how to set my keyboard to Spanish. 

Would appreciate help in this department. :-)


7. La Biblia salva.

Once again, after reviewing the passage in the LBLA, I believe that the following would be a closer translation to the LBLA:

"Ten cuidado de ti mismo y de la ensen~anza; persevera a todo ello, porque asi' asegurara's tu savacio'n y la salvacio'n de los que te escuchen. (1 Timoteo 4:16)"

"Con toda perversidad engan~ara' y hara fallecer a los que se pierden por haberse negado a amar la verdad y asi' ser salvos. (2 Tesalonicenses 2:10)"


9. La Biblia revela as Sen~or.

I believe that the LBLA translation can be used as is, in this instance:

"Y el SEN~OR se volvio' a aparecer en Silo; porque el SEN~OR se revelaba a Samuel en Silo por la palabra del SEN~OR. (1 Samuel 3:21)"


Please advise me on my approach to proof reading this article.  I welcome all suggestions for improvement. 

I aplogize for not having started sooner.  At present I am planning to dedicate a couple of hours every Sunday to continue the proof reading effort, if this is acceptable.



In Christ's Love,

Marina

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